Commentary

Commentary

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At the request of Mistoline, I am posting my comments about the story on here. If you would like to add commentary to it, just tell me!

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Mistoline-- Loved it. Let me tell you that it was very suspenseful! You had me on my tippy-toes the entire time! Also, I don't think your story was sexual. I thought it was very unique, especially since it was about an event that could actually happen. I hope to hear more from you!

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